User ID : Password:         Register here / Forgot password ?   Total Resumes : 22 Search For Resumes: Home » Joe Helmy \\\'s Resume     Joe Helmy Open Resume Joe Helmy \'s Resume User Comments Be critical and please offer ways and places to better the message and look. Target experience level is Mid-manager, experienced; not manager or higher not entry-level. Thanks!             Advice (1)   TeamPosse Joe, In your qualifications summary you should not use the first person. Instead say... Results-driven leader with keen problem solving skills and extreme passion. Creative professional focused on strategic growth through comprehensive research, innovative planning, and guided execution. Your core competencies are good. Under each company I would provide a brief corporate summary. Under each position I would provide an overview or your responsibilities. For your bullet points I would focus on accomplishments while holding the position. For example... ARCELORMITTAL | SKYLINE STEEL, Parsippany, New Jersey July 2009 – Present (Skyline Steel, LLC is a premier steel foundation supplier serving the US, Canada, Mexico, Central America, Caribbean and South American markets. Skyline Steel is a wholly-owned subsidiary of ArcelorMittal, the world’s largest and most respected steel company.) Sales and Marketing Coordinator (Provide historical analysis and substantiated guidance to executive management on a daily basis) Key Achievements: Analyzed new product launch by researching and creating surveys, selecting recipients, and making recommendations to management team regarding survey results Provided Forecasting, Budgeting, and Performance Reports and Operational Strategy for Executive Management Team Supported a nationwide informational seminar program by working with Marketing, Sales, and Management teams to select locations, speakers, special guests, and promotional materials Selected to serve on Performance Optimization Team developing strategic plans to improve steel fabrication facilities. Results entailed development of truck load staging, restructuring of manufacturing processes, reduction in damages from 2.8% to 0.13%, and elimination of errant production Make Sense? Be sure to proofread thoroughly...I found a couple of misspellings in the Skyline Steel section... Member of the USGA? I would remove that... Otherwise...Good luck! 4 months             Follow Us on Twitter!   Home      |      About us      |      My Profile      |      Contact Us Copyright © 2010 KRH Ventures, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Website Design by Sakshi Infoway Pvt. Ltd.